electric fire

Jan 24, 2011 23:17

electric fire
kyuhyun/jino, nc-17, 1331 words
jino is a teasing little bastard.
for bonomanic, ty bb for the encouragement and cheerleading and general hand-holding, ilu. i really hope you like it ;-;

So it is a really, really hard time for Kyuhyun before he manages to get alone with Jino )

genre: smut, pairing: kyuhyun/jino, !fic

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rubyls January 24 2011, 23:27:55 UTC
for gina ♥

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bonomanic January 25 2011, 00:04:19 UTC
I DON'T CARE ABOUT FUCKING LIMITED VOCABULARY AND THIS IS IT! I WILL NEVER LISTEN TO YOU AGAIN WHEN YOU SPOUT SHIT ABOUT YOURSELF THAT'S CLEARLY NOT TRUE. DDD: I will judge things myself next time. And shut up, no complaints ( ... )

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rubyls January 25 2011, 11:45:10 UTC
DO YOU REALLY LIKE IT. ;-; why do you not think it's weird DDDDDD:

idk it's your fault because you showed me those videos!!!!!!! how else was i supposed to write him and ughhhh ;-; it really isn't that good go away asdlfjasldfj

kyuhyun won't take revenge ARGHHH STOP MAKING ME WRITE MORE PORN DDDD:

oooooh. so that's your kink. ;) /note to self

ilu too bb and i think this will be horribly inadequate for the yemin you are going to give me and i am so dead rn i will have to write that kyuhae/eunhae/kyumin! asldfjkdfj

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bonomanic January 26 2011, 03:17:06 UTC
No. I was lying in your face. -.- WHAT DO YOU THINK? OF COURSE I LIKE IT? NO, WAIT, I LOVELOVELOVE IT, OKAY? COMPLETE WITH EVERY STUPID GESTURE THAT K-POP IDOLS EVER INVENTED TO SLAM THE MEANING OF THE WORD IN YOUR FACE. ;___; Seriously, weird is the last thing on my mind with this.

BAMF is a good thing, okay? More people need to see the potential of this guy as a bamf character, and I loved how you made him into one without taking away all the basis for cuteness. ♥ Would you shut up and let me praise you?

Lol. I can be persistent, too, you know? >:)

Yeah, I guess that's what comes closest. xD I had a whole flailfest today over dinner about voices and such, it was bad.

WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT, INADEQUATE? That's such bs, ide. -.- But ooooh, you're upping the drama!

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rubyls January 26 2011, 11:39:31 UTC
BUT KYUHYUN SOUNDS LIKE ME. when i'm having one of my moods. IDK does he not sound sardonic and weird? REALLY?

and asldkfjasldfj ok that was so HARD ok amking him a bamf but still kind of cute sometimes (though he's really just using his cute to get what he wants, but whatever)

i'm definitely lazier than you are persistent. or less able to write than you are persistent. this i am sure about it :DDDD

ASDFKASDFJL YOU ARE WRITING LIKE IDK A LONGFIC OR SOMETHING FOR THE YEMIN. and nope the kyuhae/eunhae/kyumin is really not coming out like i expected, and not in a good way either. CAN'T DECIDE ON ANYTHING.

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bonomanic January 27 2011, 03:09:26 UTC
SO LET HIM. I bet my characters all sound more like me than I'll ever suspect. xD I think he sounds just fine - frustration makes you sardonic, usually, you know - so stop worrying. :)

Yeah, opposite personality aspects tend to be a bitch for writers. :( I'm so not looking forward to figuring out my own version of this little guy when I'll get to the Kyuno at some point. I know I'll spend hours thinking again. xD I liked your version, though!

... as sure as you were about the bad Kyuno? Psh.

THERE'S NO WAY OF TELLING HOW FAST THINGS WILL MOVE ONCE THEY REALLY GET ROLLING, OKAY? MAYBE IT'LL BE OVER IN ANOTHER THREE PAGES. It'll come to you, hon, like, in the middle of the night or in the middle of a shower or something. Things always come to me in the bathroom or when I'm trying to fall asleep. I'll try to send you some inspiring thoughts via mind connection tonight. :D

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rubyls January 27 2011, 11:13:14 UTC
i sound like a mean bij tho. D:

KYUNO YOU ARE WRITING A KYUNO? LIKE REALLY? :DDDDDD

surer, though, so go away no more kyuno porn ever. EVER.

THREE PAGES. the kyuno was ONE AND A HALF. and the yemin porn? 886 words. A DRABBLE, REALLY. ;-; aklsdfjdsf aaauuugggghhh i want to write angst i miss writing it but NOTHING IS COMING. I HATE WRITER'S BLOCK. ;-;

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bonomanic January 29 2011, 23:47:28 UTC
So Kyuhyun also sounds like a mean bitch? I don't see it. o.O

Well. Eventually. Need to finish to gift stories first. >.< Yeah. BUT! I will, one day, because Kyuno is akshdlakjsdkajsd and Jino is my BAMF bb, okay? I need to write fic for him.

Okay, okay. -.-

AND IT CAME TO YOU! :DDDD YAY! And quality =/= quantity, so srsly, mine is just a rambling mess at the moment. D:

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rubyls January 30 2011, 00:42:55 UTC
LOL IDK ;-; i really should stop putting my own thoughts into the thing. all the stuff in brackets is the exact thing i'm thinking when i'm writing the line.

and YAY OKAY KYUNO. is it going to be porn?! :DDDD

shut up anything you write is good. because you put effort into it, bb. and omg only a bit, i'm in a very non-writing mood at the moment so nothing is coming out. (probably because i'm watching beast rn and they are making me laugh myself silly, which doesn't make for a very good angst-writing mood).

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bonomanic January 30 2011, 03:34:46 UTC
Lol, well, that's something that you can change if you feel you really have to. I didn't think it disrupted the flow or anything. :)

I don't know yet. I don't even have a plot.

Right. And you don't? P-lease. Not buying it. And it's fine, everyone has their non-writing moods. Mine was during interterm when I could've written like a million things but didn't because I didn't feel like it. But lol, that could be a reason. xD I think I need something cracky to get me back into the right mood. Then again, it's kinda too late for that. But I'm sure your story will be fine.

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rubyls January 30 2011, 16:24:31 UTC
it's just me being obnoxious and... me :(

WHATEVER I'D STAN IT

i put effort into it but IT DOESN'T COME OUT GOOD. IDK OKAY FINE. this was okay, but i can't guarantee the angst one will. i think it might come out too abstract and ugh nobody will understand it and everyone will be ...wtf is this and etc. i'm so bad at getting my point across okay.
also omg i swear your yemin will be so epic :DDDD

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bonomanic January 30 2011, 22:17:43 UTC
... *sigh*

LOL. MAYBE IT'LL BE REALLY AWFULLY CORNY FLUFF.

That's for other people to judge, so shut up. Tch. I'm pretty sure that your good feeling will make it good stuff. Don't worry so much. :)
At least it'll have an epic length, lol. xD

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rubyls January 30 2011, 22:42:43 UTC
I LIKE CORNY FLUFF. :DDDD

okay, okay :( but i haven't written much either just half a page more and nada. i think i'll get more into the flow of things when i get to the present part of the fic, though, it's all background and the past i'm writing rn.
it will be EPIC IN ALL WAYS I AM SURE.

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bonomanic February 2 2011, 04:11:14 UTC
Oh, well, I guess that's good then. In case it turns out like that I know at least one person will like it. xD

Everything needs background, as unfortunate as it sometimes is. I have a feeling I always spend too much time writing the damn background, hm. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for some flow! :D
We'll see. Maybe it'll just turn into EPIC FAIL. But that's fine, too, learning experience. ^^

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rubyls February 2 2011, 10:19:52 UTC
OFC. :DDDD

kekeke i wrote more and i wrote kyuhae porn :DDDDD see post for details.
and no go away nothing you write could be fail. OKAY?

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bonomanic February 3 2011, 03:00:04 UTC
You only believe that because I don't post epic fail.

/off to finish replying and LOOKING AT SAID POST. :D

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