"Fault" would insinuate that this was in any way bad... it really was everything BUT. I loved this. All of it. Every one of the sixteen thousand words.
To the point where when the link appeared for it in my frinds inbox from ff.net, she forwarded it to me because she knew I'd want to read it (though I'd got teh same link... =DD)
I think that was the right length! The internal monologue wouldn't have been nearly as Jess-ish if you had tried to cut. Anytime you want to write Jess and Becker, I'm happy to enjoy :-)
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! This is AWESOME! Oh, Jess is perfect and brilliant and the BEST. Becker is SUCH a wonderful, adorable idiot. :D Oh, I love this SO MUCH! I can't even begin to tell you. The creature, the setting, all of it is fantastic! Thank you so, so, SO much. ♥ It is everything I've ever wanted and more. Thank you!
*thud* This is possibly my favourite Becker/Jess fic yet. You have both their voices down so clearly that I could almost imagine it happening, and Jess is totally bad ass, she is wicked awesome. I love how it was that Becker was worried and utterly emotionally retarded that caused the misunderstandings.
This is brilliant, absolutely awesome.
The story is well paced and exciting and I re-read it twice before leaving a comment because there are so many priceless little bits that just make this story. Guh.
Seriously though, favourite Becker/Jess fic ever. And definitely up there in my top 5 favourite Primeval fics. <3
(And there is more on FF.net, you say, that is not on LJ? I must go read...)
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To the point where when the link appeared for it in my frinds inbox from ff.net, she forwarded it to me because she knew I'd want to read it (though I'd got teh same link... =DD)
You are simply wonderful.
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This is brilliant, absolutely awesome.
The story is well paced and exciting and I re-read it twice before leaving a comment because there are so many priceless little bits that just make this story. Guh.
Seriously though, favourite Becker/Jess fic ever. And definitely up there in my top 5 favourite Primeval fics. <3
(And there is more on FF.net, you say, that is not on LJ? I must go read...)
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