request
So I've got about 15k of Ray/Ray that I've been sitting on awhile. I've been staring at it so long, I've lost whatever perspective I had -- can't see the forest because all those damn trees are in the way.
Does anybody feel like reading over it and giving macro concrit, especially wrt pacing, plot and characterization? The prose could use work too, but I don't want to polish a scene that's going to be cut later.
Any takers? You can be rough as you like. ;)
Does anybody feel like reading over it and giving macro concrit, especially wrt pacing, plot and characterization? The prose could use work too, but I don't want to polish a scene that's going to be cut later.
Any takers? You can be rough as you like. ;)