Fic: Within Sight (2/2)

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From part one.

Comments

[praiseofshadows]

Wonderful! ♥

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Thanks! :)

[persephassax]

ah.. arthur, always remembering the important things in a time of crisis.

this was brilliant. i loved how you managed to write without using visual descriptions (it can be so very difficult.)

exquisitely well done. absolutely lovely.

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Thank you so much -- I'm glad you liked.

i loved how you managed to write without using visual descriptions (it can be so very difficult.)

It was challenging because I kept forgetting that I couldn't use them. *g* But it was a lot of fun, too.

[callistianstar]

This is really awesome. I enjoyed this so very much. (“A metaphorical precipice.”) You even had Slash!Dragon. ^^ That was too awesome. ^^ (“Yes, yes, fine. I yield. This is me yielding.” AND “I would die for you, Sire ... but it's not my first choice.”) I really loved Merlin here. I think you did an excellent job with this from Arthur's perspective. I was surprised that Merlin lifted the curse rather than the two of them trying to make the other sorcerer do it, but I'm glad for Arthur's reaction. With the sorcerer trying to put them at odds against each other, he probably shouldn't have tried to implant doubts in their minds with the other present and able to discount the doubts. Lovely job with this.

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Thanks so much for the feedback. I'm glad you liked.

And of course I had the SD! No story is complete without, imo. :)

[aeroport_art]

Hee!! This was a lovely little tale. The characterizaton is lovely; the boys are fun and very much in step with canon. Fun plot, too. Thanks for sharing, this will be recced!

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The rec is muchly appreciated. *blush*

the boys are fun and very much in step with canon.

Thanks! It's funny just how little tweaking is required to get them from bff to lovers. Not that I'm complaining! :)

[rainchild]

Loved this!

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*twirls you*