business email issues
Hi everyone,
Can you please help me and check the message? MSWord sais it's fine, but I do not trust it too much.
Pat,
Thank you for the email.
I checked out XXX's web site and it looks like there is a good match between my most recent work at YYY and the projects XXX is working on.
My phone number is (206) 555 5555 and the resume is enclosed.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Liza
And if there is anyone in Seattle, WA, who needs some practice or help in Russian, and who is ready to help me with my English, that would be really awesome.
Thanks!
UPDATE.
The last question: My phone number is (206) 555 5555, and the resume is enclosed. Is the comma needed?
Can you please help me and check the message? MSWord sais it's fine, but I do not trust it too much.
Pat,
Thank you for the email.
I checked out XXX's web site and it looks like there is a good match between my most recent work at YYY and the projects XXX is working on.
My phone number is (206) 555 5555 and the resume is enclosed.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Liza
And if there is anyone in Seattle, WA, who needs some practice or help in Russian, and who is ready to help me with my English, that would be really awesome.
Thanks!
UPDATE.
The last question: My phone number is (206) 555 5555, and the resume is enclosed. Is the comma needed?