Fic: Lupercalia

Apr 25, 2014 22:02

Author/Artist: starfishstar
Title: Lupercalia
Rating & Warnings: PG
Word Count: ~1,150
Prompt: stereolightning - "February 15 - the day after Valentine's day, OR, also, the Roman holiday Lupercalia"
Summary: For some reason, Remus doesn’t seem keen on the idea of running around the city naked, sacrificing a goat, or lashing anyone with a whip made of animal hide. Luckily, ( Read more... )

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starfishstar April 27 2014, 11:27:24 UTC
YAY, so glad you like it!

You'd mentioned Lupercalia before, so as soon as I saw the prompt, the gears started turning. And then came the idea to combine it with a full moon, and it all fell together.

I love the idea of the golden wolf who "drives away the wolves of night," too... And I think Remus needs to hear that sort of thing much more often, that it's possible to be a "good" kind of wolf, too :-)

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shimotsuki April 26 2014, 01:18:55 UTC
What stereolightning said, heh -- I was also really struck by the way the somber first few lines, followed by the banter and smiles and warmth -- works to show Remus reemerging from the pain and danger of the transformation and coming back to himself and his life.

I adore this stubborn, loving Tonks, and the way Remus has come to where he doesn't feel he needs to try too hard to push her away. And I really like the way she can make him laugh, which is probably what he needs most of all after the full moon -- that, and a gentle touch and some snuggling under the blanket, of course. Aww.

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starfishstar April 27 2014, 11:36:53 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, that's where I like to think they've ended up by this point in DH - understanding each other so well that they hear the subtext too, and know how to help each other even when the other is protesting they don't need help (cough, Remus) - and, yeah, that Remus has become more willing to accept that help, too, and is even able to show that he appreciates it!

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sspring92 April 28 2014, 04:31:03 UTC
Love this little moment! Remus finally realizing he deserves some happiness!

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starfishstar April 28 2014, 08:37:10 UTC
Thank you! Yes, Remus is finally learning :-)

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huldrejenta April 29 2014, 21:06:22 UTC
What a wonderful moment you've captured here!
I love stubborn Tonks, and that Remus isn't quite as stubborn ;)
There's so much love between these two here, and there's humour and a lovely last line. I really enjoyed this a lot :)

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starfishstar April 30 2014, 12:32:41 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, I love writing stubborn Tonks, who understands what Remus needs and won't let him sneak his way out of it :-) And thank you also about the last line, because that's something I still find quite hard, finding endings/ending lines that work.

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starfishstar May 3 2014, 16:36:24 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, I'm all about moments where these two get to be fun and easy and happy together :-)

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