Prompt 25

Aug 25, 2007 19:34

Title: The Plan
Author: SugarAnnie
Format & Word Count: Short fic, 484 words
Rating: Higher than usual, definitely. PG 13, I think.
Prompt: 25 bathtub picture
Warning: implied sexual situations
Summary: Not that cold, but if he keeps standing there, the plan she made about ten seconds ago is not going to work.
Author's Note: When reading the prompts I was immediately inspired…by 25,26 and 27. That’s why you haven’t heard from me yet. And apologies to all of you that I didn’t comment as much on your fics as I usually do. You’re all great, but since I am doing my stay abroad for university at the moment, I don’t find so much time to be on the internet, sorry. Now about the fic, I actually had something similar on my mind for quite some time now. The prompt made me finally write it.


When she comes home after work that night, she is tired and cold and feels like doing nothing at all. She is glad that there’s someone waiting there for her, but on the other hand, all she really feels like is dropping onto her bed and sleeping until next week, if not longer.
“Dora! I’ve run you a bath, why don’t you go there while I just finish making dinner?”
She wonders whether he feels obliged to do all of this, because she is not home to do so, or whether he really enjoys doing it all. But a bath is a really good idea, she thinks.
The bathroom is warm, and the water Remus has already run for her looks even more tempting now. There are lots of bubbles, and she immediately feels herself relax as she slips in the foamy, hot water.
After five minutes of just lying there enjoying the sensation of it all, the door opens slightly, and Remus’ head appears in the crack between it. And that gives her an idea.
”Could you come in and close the door, please? It is getting so cold in here.” Not that cold, but if he keeps standing there, the plan she made about ten seconds ago is not going to work.
He does immediately as she has told him. It wouldn’t even have taken her lifting up her legs a bit so he can look at them.
And now he’s exactly where she wants him- okay, exactly where he has to be at that stage of the plan. Not where she finally wants him.
“I just thought - I am not that hungry, I can wait a bit longer for my dinner. Why don’t you come in and join me?”
“Should I really? I think I’d rather go downstairs and wait there for you. You need some time off after such a long day at work, I think.”
Not part of the plan. And definitely teasing only-or is it? Remus is really starting to make his way for the door.
Coincidence helps her plan work out. Because when she had lifted her legs to give him a view of them to make him come in, she has splashed water all over the bathroom floor. And when he is walking towards the door, he slips in it.
And falls directly into the bathtub, landing half on top of her.
“Well, my plan did not really include you wearing all your clothes. You could have just gone along with it.”
“I wanted to. I just wanted to lock the door, in case someone came to check on us.”
”But I got what I wanted.” She smiles. “In a strange way, but I got it.”
”Don’t get used to it - I first need to get out of these wet clothes now, I think.”
”Well, just let me help you.”
”Another part of the plan?”
“Exactly.”

prompt 25, sugarannie

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