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Choices

Aug 13, 2007 13:59

Title: Choices (Part 1/2)
Author: jncar
Format and Word Count: Fic, 5,080 (this part)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: non-graphic sex, swearing, violence, torture (part 2 only)
Prompt: # 7, Chiaroscuro
Summary: Remus struggles with feelings of guilt and regret over his recent choices, and must face the darkest side of himself as he fights to protect the people ( Read more... )

jncar, august ficathon, prompt 7

Comments 45

jadeddiva August 13 2007, 20:40:05 UTC

Oh - wow. This is great - an excellent look into Remus' mind as he acts irrationally but totally within character. Great job, and I can't wait to read the next part.

jncar August 14 2007, 03:23:08 UTC

Thanks! I'm sure Remus is full of torrential emotions--he just usually manages to suppress them.

katyhasclogs August 13 2007, 20:43:17 UTC

Gosh, this really was excellent. I think you captured very well the aspect of Remus that is very self-loathing. I got the impression that what he was interpreting as disgust and disappointment in others wasn't at all - that he was just projecting his feelings onto them.

jncar August 14 2007, 03:24:52 UTC

Thanks! Yes--poor Remus is always full of self-loathing, isn't he?

morrighangw August 13 2007, 20:49:30 UTC

Poor Remus and his insecurities. =( This is beautifully written and I can't wait to see what comes next. =D

jncar August 14 2007, 03:25:24 UTC

Thanks!

lorelei_lynn August 13 2007, 21:08:13 UTC

Oh Remus - so deluded and insecure that he misinteprets everyone else. How long will it take him to come to his senses?

jncar August 14 2007, 03:26:05 UTC

Thanks! Yes, the poor man is riddled with insecurity, isn't he?

gijane7702 August 13 2007, 21:17:46 UTC

Oh God, poor Remus!!

PLEASE have him happier in the second part. He was so ESTATIC the second half of DH. Oh...*gets it now*

Fantatic job!

jncar August 14 2007, 03:26:45 UTC

Thanks! Remus will be happy...eventually. ;)