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Prompt 2: For What Would Be

Aug 13, 2007 00:15

Title: For What Would Be
Author: phe_o
Format/Word Count: ficlet/ 665
Rating: PG
Prompt: 2: "There's no such thing as a crowded battlefield. Battlefields are lonely places." - Alfred M. Gray
Summary: "But that thought slams her forward, and all of the Auror training in the wizarding world wouldn’t account for the sudden, quick jets of spellwork ( Read more... )

august ficathon, phe_o, prompt 2

Comments 14

eternalylost August 13 2007, 06:44:18 UTC

This was brilliant.
It's written so well and it captures the emotions and the thoughts perfectly. The descriptions are stellar as well.

phe_o August 14 2007, 04:44:40 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

solo_chan August 13 2007, 09:38:03 UTC

;________;

There are no words. It reminds me of a moment in Memiore of Geisha.

"At our temple there is a a poem called Loss but all the words have been scratched out.

You cannot read loss...only feel it."

<33333

phe_o August 14 2007, 04:45:26 UTC

Thank you so much! Makes me tear up too... :) And I couldn't ask for a better comparison. :D

gijane7702 August 13 2007, 18:04:50 UTC

Brilliant! *loves*

I hope, at least, they died together.

Fantastic job!

phe_o August 14 2007, 04:46:11 UTC

Definitely, they did. Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it! :D

morrighangw August 13 2007, 18:36:42 UTC

This is amazing. ;_; Guh, it's SO emotional.

phe_o August 14 2007, 04:46:35 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it. :)

sparkly_stuff August 14 2007, 02:54:05 UTC

:(((

Just lovely.

phe_o August 14 2007, 04:47:01 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it.