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[killerforhire]

Title: The Pond
Author: killerforhire
Format & Word Count: Fic, 1523 words
Rating: pg-13
Prompt: 12
Warning: Tiny, tiny bit of profanity
Summary: See, Remus wasn't looking forward to the holidays this year very much. Not that he does most years, but most definitely not this year. He really didn't have much to look forward to.Author's Note: I haven'

Comments

[jadeddiva]

How very perfect - and very nice to read, now that I just read an article on Factory Records founder Tony Wilson's death :( Fantastic.

[princesstopaz]

To sum up my feelings for this in a few words: this was cute and funny, and then sad. To look at them before and then after... but I have to say the kiss surprised me. Given Remus' attitude, it just seems kind of cruel and wrong, and giving her false hope.

[shimotsuki]

I really liked the banter ("...do you want to experience that awkward feeling people get when you watch a shouting match unfolding before your eyes?" / "Sure."), and the contrast between the way things were and the way they are now. Tonks is pretty enigmatic, too, acting casual but deliberately seeking Remus out, and leaving him the book -- was the rock-skipping day the first time they'd admitted interest in each other, and is that why she left it? Interesting.

[lady_tavington]

Awwww, so perfect, so cute! I love the snark, I love the dialogue, and I love that they're holding hands without knowing that they are. Sooooo cute.

[phe_o]

This is really excellent--I really like how it's not overdone and builds on the simplest of acts. And your weaving of past and present works very well here, too.