Prompt 21

[ohginnyfan]

Title: Temptation
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Comments

[writermerrin]

Interesting little flirty piece with Remus being thoughful but not too broody :)

In this sentence: They had, over the course of the last few months, being playing a game of flirting with each other. , I think you mean 'been' instead of 'being.' Actually that sentence is a good example of the subtle change in relationshp that forshadows the ending very sweetly.

[freakinwinky]

Cute, entertaining little peice. We need things like this sometimes amidst the piles of angst and drama. Good job!

[krumfan]

Oh....it was so lovely....I love the flirting between them, the teasing...they both know they desire each other. Flaming hot!