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Prompt Thirteen

Jun 30, 2006 00:06

Title: Their Toughest Mission Yet
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prompt 13, gijane7702

Comments 14

freakinwinky June 30 2006, 05:57:28 UTC

Cute! A very nice fluffy little peice, though there are still quite a few typos that you might want to check again. Alltogehter though...good job.

gijane7702 June 30 2006, 10:26:40 UTC

Thanks for commenting, glad you enjoyed.

I'll look it over later. I threw this together at work, so I bet there are typos galore. Then I 'self-beta'ed' it myself at 1AM :S

I should stop doing that :D

~C

majorcarter_sg1 June 30 2006, 07:05:42 UTC

haha that was so cute. I love how Remus knew what to do. and that line about the last nappy he'd changed being Harry's was so funny...i can see that. Tonks held the kid like i do when stupid people shove their kids at me...until i can pass them off to people who know what they are doing so i totally loved that part.
-Sam

gijane7702 June 30 2006, 10:30:06 UTC

Thanks for commenting, glad you enjoyed.

I'm eying up the prompt list, seeing if I can find one to write Tonks taking the mickey out of Harry or continuing on Remus and Tonks' baby-sitting adventures.

I love other peoples' kids. I just had a baby that I was holding (I can do that properly) at work grab my boobs, and I was all like, 'Nothing there, darling!'

~C
~C

author_by_night June 30 2006, 11:50:35 UTC

As always, I like! The ending was especially brilliant.

gijane7702 June 30 2006, 15:38:47 UTC

Thanks for commenting!

Krumfan helped with the ending. The orginal was written hastily written late last night.

~C

mercutio_rane June 30 2006, 13:26:56 UTC

Very cute! :) You do have some typo's that spellcheck won't catch for you, like 'quite' instead of 'quiet.' Those are always the ones I never catch in my stuff, too. :/ Thanks for the read! :)

gijane7702 June 30 2006, 15:40:01 UTC

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it.

I was very bad and wrote this a work. I'll go through later and correct.

~C

krumfan June 30 2006, 18:49:18 UTC

Oi....Lovely girl. That baby just sounds adorable...Me likes!

gijane7702 June 30 2006, 19:04:06 UTC

Thanks for reading (and proofing ;) ) I'm glad you liked it.

Carissa is adorable, no? It's nice to see that Remus and Tonks are planning to work as one regarding their own children.

And, with what I do to them, they'll need too :D

~C

krumfan June 30 2006, 19:10:50 UTC

Check your hotmail...I just emailed you...BYEEEEEEE

gijane7702 June 30 2006, 19:26:15 UTC

We'll deal with that later, dolls :)

Thanks tho

~C