LJ Idol 10: Week 0: Introduction

Nov 10, 2016 17:32



Just breathe

She whispers it to herself. It’s a worry stone, a call to mindfulness.

She flicks ash off her fingertips; blows smoke into the air.

She needs a place to hide; thinks the pain in her shoulder is a pinched nerve.

She is given permission to seek refuge in the beat up beige and blue, faded but still mostly functional, Ford Conquest parked ( Read more... )

prose blog, here i go again, ljidol, selfie tag

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eternal_ot November 11 2016, 11:03:25 UTC
Great atmosphere, you built it up well. Good Job!

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rswndrlst November 12 2016, 15:50:36 UTC

thank you!! I'm feeling very inspired this season despite circumstances, let's hope it lasts ^.^

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xlovebecomesher November 12 2016, 04:05:46 UTC
Good luck this season! :D

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rswndrlst November 12 2016, 16:38:43 UTC
Thank you! and thanks for reading!

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jake67jake November 13 2016, 02:17:13 UTC
Very feeling intense! Not sure I was prepared for that.

Good luck to you.

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rswndrlst November 13 2016, 23:51:40 UTC

Thank you! I hope it's not too intense!

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rayaso November 13 2016, 15:57:55 UTC
Excellent, and I hope to see more from you!

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rswndrlst November 13 2016, 23:52:00 UTC

Thank you!

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baxaphobia November 13 2016, 17:53:30 UTC
Whew! I didn't expect such an emotional intense piece. nicely done. Good luck!

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rswndrlst November 13 2016, 23:52:51 UTC

Thank you, I think I even suprised myself with this one

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