a little bit revised
this one may seem a little similar to one i wrote before....but heres a new draft for all of ya....hope u enjoy...i know i did when i wrote it.
The air was cool and refreshing as I lay there staring up into the night, falling asleep, yet so wide-awake. There was no sound except for the distant wind howling through dark outlines of trees on the ridge of the hills.
Letting my mind wander, I look into her eyes and seem to float away into the air and into the heavens that are lit up by the lights of the past that are reflecting in her soft eyes. I lie there next to her in these blankets and wonder, how many people have been in this exact place looking up at the ceiling of soft twinkling lights, with the person they care most about, that act as a cover to warm them. I wonder how anybody could go on living with out ever seeing what I have seen with someone so special and so beautiful next to him. I wonder how I could ever describe what I have seen in these few hours, miles away from the lights of the bustling cities. I wonder how this situation could be set up to this extent by anyone less than He who placed the stars where they sit, and to know them all by name. I wonder how extremely, insignificant I must seem to all of the eyes staring down at me and watching me as I look into her eyes and see them staring back, and I wonder how.
As I drift out of my body and into the night, I stop thinking, time stands still, all turns peaceful. There are no more worries of what needs to be done or stresses of the everyday life. It is as though her eyes are all that inhabit my surroundings; they are all I can now think of. Instead of seeing the random, faint, lonely dot in the reflection of her eye, I see the random, faint, lonely dark speckle that is near invisible now that the moon hides behind the majestic crest of the mountain ridge and it is as if the heavens now inhabit her simply beautiful eyes.
I finally start to slowly and peacefully drift off into the night, cuddled deeply in her arms. I once wished, hoped, wondered if there would be a day when I could share this moment with some body that I know would appreciate this experience as I would, I wondered if we would lay there together without a word being spoken, without a thought escaping our minds, without this moment going to waste. I wondered. And now I wonder no more.
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just so u know how special u r
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The air was cool and refreshing as I lay there staring up into the night, falling asleep, yet so wide-awake. There was no sound except for the distant wind howling through dark outlines of trees on the ridge of the hills.
Letting my mind wander, I look into her eyes and seem to float away into the air and into the heavens that are lit up by the lights of the past that are reflecting in her soft eyes. I lie there next to her in these blankets and wonder, how many people have been in this exact place looking up at the ceiling of soft twinkling lights, with the person they care most about, that act as a cover to warm them. I wonder how anybody could go on living with out ever seeing what I have seen with someone so special and so beautiful next to him. I wonder how I could ever describe what I have seen in these few hours, miles away from the lights of the bustling cities. I wonder how this situation could be set up to this extent by anyone less than He who placed the stars where they sit, and to know them all by name. I wonder how extremely, insignificant I must seem to all of the eyes staring down at me and watching me as I look into her eyes and see them staring back, and I wonder how.
As I drift out of my body and into the night, I stop thinking, time stands still, all turns peaceful. There are no more worries of what needs to be done or stresses of the everyday life. It is as though her eyes are all that inhabit my surroundings; they are all I can now think of. Instead of seeing the random, faint, lonely dot in the reflection of her eye, I see the random, faint, lonely dark speckle that is near invisible now that the moon hides behind the majestic crest of the mountain ridge and it is as if the heavens now inhabit her simply beautiful eyes.
I finally start to slowly and peacefully drift off into the night, cuddled deeply in her arms. I once wished, hoped, wondered if there would be a day when I could share this moment with some body that I know would appreciate this experience as I would, I wondered if we would lay there together without a word being spoken, without a thought escaping our minds, without this moment going to waste. I wondered. And now I wonder no more.
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just so u know how special u r
<333333333333333333