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dine December 16 2008, 04:43:07 UTC
I liked this lots - my knowledge of of belly dancing is limited (mostly bits I've gleaned from various folks on LJ talking about their classes/experiences) but you made things clear, and I loved the character interactions

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rsadelle December 16 2008, 18:05:30 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad it worked.

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norwich36 December 16 2008, 05:21:45 UTC
Hmm. I actually think if you cut it off after Christmas, it reads like a finished story rather than something unfinished. Though obviously I wish you had had inspiration for second semester.

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rsadelle December 16 2008, 18:05:48 UTC
I thought about doing that, but I wanted them to have a real happy ending together.

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