I liked this lots - my knowledge of of belly dancing is limited (mostly bits I've gleaned from various folks on LJ talking about their classes/experiences) but you made things clear, and I loved the character interactions
Hmm. I actually think if you cut it off after Christmas, it reads like a finished story rather than something unfinished. Though obviously I wish you had had inspiration for second semester.
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