Bonus Fic: When We Kiss They're Perfectly Aligned for susan5124

[liseuse]

Title: When We Kiss They're Perfectly Aligned
Author: liseuse
Recipient: susan5124
Rating: R, but for swearing.
Word Count: 2,050
Summary: Getting drunk leads to misunderstandings and hiding under beds.
Author's notes: Written as a bonus fic for susan5124 and thus unbetaed. I hope you enjoy it! The title is from The Postal Service's Such Great Heights. Any errors/typos?

Comments

[brighty18]

Xenophon is the coolest owl ever. I like Hedwig, but he's much cooler. Just sayin'.

Honestly, this fic was loads of fun and, frankly, hilarious. Sirius was particularly endearing here: enthusiastic, witty, clumsy, and very, very human. The sliding under the bed, bit was genius:
He could hear clunks and bangs from above as Sirius bashed around the room cursing at inanimate objects that had the temerity to be in his way. Then the curtain lifted and a tea tray slid in, followed by some pillows, a duvet, a pack of cigarettes and then Sirius.

And Remus' reactions to Sirius were priceless. That conversation at the end where they both admit the stuff they don't know? That was fantastic: clever and boyish and somehow very "right" for the characters and situation.

Loved it!

[secretsolitaire]

*huge grin* Oh, this was fun.

Looks like not everyone knows everything that everyone knows.

That's an understatement! Silly boys.

[emilyia]

This is lovely and boyish and so real <3 Thank you!

[magnetic_pole]

Aw, this is charming! May all problems turn out to be as amusing misunderstandings as this one. Enjoyed! M.

[remuslives23]

I adore their banter here! Love your clueless Remus! Great job!