Bonus Fic: The Flip Side for midnight_birth

[remuslives23]

Title: The Flip Side
Author: remuslives23
Recipient: midnight_birth
Rating: NC17
Highlight for Warnings: *fisticuffs leading to rather rough wankage with possibly a moment or two of dub con, language, more angst than I'd intended to include. Also, no mention of Christmas. *
Word Count: 1490.
Summary: Love and hate are two sides of the same coin. All it would take is just

Comments

[dogsunderfoot]

Yes, I know I'm a pervert and a degenerate, but I do like this one. The anger and ferocity--the incredible passion! It's emotion at its most raw and you really take them down to a primal level--and then you build them back up again at the end. It's as painful emotionally as it is physically at the end ("...pushing back the fear that rose in him every time their arguments degenerated into this; the fear that one day, their eyes wouldn't meet, that they wouldn't make that connection, wouldn't find that forgiveness and that when they finished, the anger and resentment would still be tearing through them.") because you know that time is coming for them. And that hurts terribly.
Still, it's very well done and I love it!

[remuslives23]

You are a filthy pervert, but I wouldn't love you if you weren't. :) Thank you so much for your constant support, hon. *bows down at your feet*

[sea_shtick]

Woooooo! Oh man, and I so hoped someone would find time to write this prompt. Very, very nicely done. Guhhh.

[remuslives23]

Thanks, hon! I'm really glad you liked what I did with it. :)

[midnight_birth]

GSAFDATYCYAC!!!!

*runs around workplace like an idiot* (Who needs customers, anyway??)

SQUEE!!!

This was so so awesome!!! I guess it's no secret that rough-sex is just one of my biggest kinks, so I was thrilled when I saw you picked it up! And this! This is so fucking hot and just exactly what I wanted and what I love!!!

Your Sirius is amazing. An apology indeed! It's so him to say something like that thus tactlessly and think that it would suffice! And I loved seeing Remus's breaking point. It was just so nice seeing Remus get all angry and violent (this doesn't often happen in canon or fic!) and just knock Sirius in the face. And, of course, I wouldn't expect anything less of Sirius than to hit right back.

I adore the way you transitioned such violent fighting into the violent wanking. The way Remus bites Sirius's neck, and how everything unravels. How Remus is mad at Sirius for getting off on something like that, and they both are. There is something so very animal about the whole encounter. They start with words and

[remuslives23]

*SQUEEEEEE!*

I'm so glad you liked it! I was nervous writing for you - you are awesome - and I'm so relieved you liked it. I was worried about the end so I'm thrilled you liked it (and they lived happily ever after in my head too!)

*hugs you*

Thank you for your prompt. I almost dropped the laptop in excitement when I saw it!

[secretsolitaire]

Deliciously hot and angsty!

[remuslives23]

Thanks, hon! So glad you liked it!

[brighty18]

Holy sh*t! ****fans self*** That was incredibly hot! In other words...daaaaaamn!

The whole thing was brilliantly sexual, and you write action very well. This bit, however, was really wonderful: Remus saw red and before he knew it, his fist had shot out, catching Sirius on that beautifully square jaw. Sirius' head snapped to the side like an elastic band, his body twisting with the impact, and he staggered back.

But the ending? Oh, Merlin, that was powerful. I love how not only did it foreshadow canon, but it wasn't clear who Remus was afraid would fail to forgive who.

Brilliant!

[remuslives23]

Thank you, hon! I don't often write action because I'm never happy with how it comes out, but I'm so glad you liked it here. :)

And YES! That's the feeling I wanted for the ending! *hugs*