FIC: The Beginning of Something Old for moonlitelupins

[mezzopianoforte]

Title: The Start of Something Old
Author: mezzopianoforte
Recipient: moonlitelupines
Rating: PG-13
Highlight for Warnings: *swearing *
Word Count: 1940
Summary: In which there is late-night-kissing, passing queer friends the gravy, an inadvertent de-closeting and the start of a relationship.
Author's notes: Thanks so much,molsymo, for the fantastic beta job! And moonlitelupines, I really hope you

Comments

[leafyaki]

Oh. *breath whooshes out* Oh, oh my, this just makes me smile so hard my cheeks ache. How beautifully your art accompanies the fic! I love your characterization, the way Peter nonchalantly passes the gravy to Remus without thinking about it, the way Sirius gets hurt over Remus not having told him first that he is gay. And the apology from Sirius, and them getting together... ♥ It's so very lovely and the ending is so very hopeful. What a beautiful fic to sigh over this evening! :D

Finally, I love the contrast between your two pieces of art, the winter cold in one and the lazy warmth in the other. The changing of seasons is a sweet touch to their relationship, how they develop through the years and how they will always stay together even from the end of the fic.

So nicely done, what a great fic-and-art in one! ♥

[mezzopianoforte]

aww I'm glad you liked it! <3 thanks for the lovely comments

[dear_tiger]

Dude, that scene when Peter passed the gravy to Remus made me laugh so hard :) Peter is awesome!

[mezzopianoforte]

haha I'm glad :D thank you <3

[mezzopianoforte]

aren't they! <3

[rhye]

That was the best coming out ever. Poor Sirius had his thunder stolen, but also in a very good way. Lovely, thanks!

[mezzopianoforte]

haha, he recovered pretty quickly from having his thunder stolen, I am sure ;) glad you liked it!

[mezzopianoforte]

thank you! :)