Comments | rs_small_gifts: Fic: The Man and the Wolf for anna

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Fic: The Man and the Wolf for anna_bm

Dec 14, 2008 16:24

Title: The Man and the Wolf
Author: tiger_flame
Beta: goddessriss
Written for: anna_bm
Rating: G
Prompt: Remus and Padfoot interaction
Summary: Sirius decides to keep Remus company before the Change an Padfoot and controls the Wolf during the full moon.
Any other notes, warnings, etc.: Hope you like this! I wrote the wolf/Padfoot interaction and ( Read more... )

2008, rated g, fic

Comments 27

spacefragments December 24 2008, 16:39:10 UTC

aw, sirius is the sweetest boyfriend ever.

and i really liked the wolf-thoughts. wooden stones, heh.

tiger_flame December 25 2008, 04:42:49 UTC

*smiles* Oh thank you so much!!

mindabbles December 24 2008, 17:08:14 UTC

I like the imagery of the second part. I really like the "almost wolf" thought--that struck me. Nice work on the addition. Sweet Padfoot.

tiger_flame December 25 2008, 04:43:28 UTC

*grins* Thanks!! I really liked that part and wanted to keep it, so I just tried to work it in somehow...

beeinmybonnet December 24 2008, 17:10:07 UTC

Oh, oh, oh! This is for me? ♥ ♥ ♥

This is so, so lovely! ♥ You managed to include so many of my favourites: Remus being a smoker and fond of touch, Sirius wanting to be a healer and so in love... Just, oh. ♥ All these things I don't get to see often enough. *g*

This is such a sweet story. I loved James' "O RLY?" when Sirius pre-emptively excused himself, Remus being sarcastic (“Riiight. Right before my body rips itself apart and becomes a monster is the perfect time for us to snog.” = ♥) and their cuddling. The wolf's POV was lovely to read -- "The Other" was a wonderful idea! -- and the last part, with Sirius, was adorable. ♥

Really, I just love this, and am so grateful for it. Thank you!! ♥ ♥ ♥

You like?! tiger_flame December 25 2008, 04:48:39 UTC

*grins* YAY!!!! You like it!!! *bounces* Oh, You may be happy with it, but I'm ecstatic that you like it!!!! *spins around*

*grins* I'm so glad that you like Remus, and Sirius and the banter. I was kinda worried that you wouldn't like it...*stops wibbling now* I'm so, so glad you like it!! *hugs you* Have a great holiday dear!

leafyaki December 24 2008, 17:58:52 UTC

Aww, Sirius! That is really sweet of him, to try and take care of Remus as much as possible :] And snuggling! Ohhh I love snuggle fics. This is very lovely!

tiger_flame December 25 2008, 04:48:56 UTC

*grins* YAY!! I'm so happy you liked!!

rhye December 24 2008, 18:56:36 UTC

I adored the wolf's thoughts as well. They're simplistic, but it's totally unfair, I think, to call it a monster. It's simply what it was meant to be, and is trying to exist and survive. It's not the wolf's fault that people are it's natural food source and means of procreation! I do think this is the first time I've seen Padfoot as the dominant animal in the pack, though. It was a nice change-up :) More is always welcome.

tiger_flame December 25 2008, 04:51:39 UTC

I've always thought that Padfoot had to have been the dominate one if they had run around for as long as they did. If the wolf had been the dominat one, then he could have run off and bitten someone and they wouln't have been able to do anything about it. Because of that and Sirius' reaction in PoA (the trying to get control of the wolf when he changed), I've always thought of Padfoot being the dominate. *shrugs* It's just how I write it...

I'm glad you liked!!!