a flame in two cupped hands
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such_heightswritten for:
glass_icarusrating: PG-13
prompt: i would like to be the air that inhabits you for a moment only. i would like to be that unnoticed & that necessary.
summary: Sirius didn't crouch down to tuck the coat under Remus's shoulders, didn't press a soft kiss to Remus's forehead the way he wanted
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I really, really love this! Saving to bookmarks :-) The build-up of tension, and then the release, and this:
"Oh my god," Remus muttered. "Oh, god, look. I'll be -- we can just -- I will see you soon."
Perfect. *loves*
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This! Sirius followed him out, because Remus was probably his centre of gravity now. I love the center of gravity bit! It's such a lovely phrasing.
And this too: "Okay." Sirius managed both syllables without doing something idiotic. Ohhh Sirius! You are so so adorable.
Very lovely story! Made me smile so very hard :D
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he'd gone completely round the bend and had to stop himself greeting everyone he saw with "Remus Lupin kissed me, and how are you today?"
Love that bit best I think.
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thank you.
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xxxxxx
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