Fic: If Wishes Were Horses for carmine_ink

Nov 26, 2008 20:58

Title: If Wishes Were Horses
Author: molsymo
Written for: carmine_ink
Rating: Under 13, for language
Prompt: Christmas in a foreign country (and kinda Non-magic AU - Remus and Sirius as college roommates)
Summary: Remus thinks that he’s not going to make it eight more days like this.

If Wishes Were Horses )

2008, rated pg, fic

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roterhimmel December 3 2008, 15:43:24 UTC
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I'm not good at this random typing thing trying to express my incoherency but just - OMG AWWWW HOW CUTE, my first reaction to the end. Sirius, you moron! And Remus! And oh God! Just, how cute and silly! I loved it :D

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molsymo December 3 2008, 22:31:03 UTC
oh, you made my day:) best first comment ever? thank you!

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spacefragments December 3 2008, 15:46:34 UTC
ooooh you. i loved this and thank god this ended on a happy note or it would have ruined the rest of my day. :o

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molsymo December 3 2008, 22:29:29 UTC
I'm so very relieved that I didn't ruin your day. I'm equally relieved that you ever thought it an option that it wouldn't end up happy! I am pretty much incapable of writing mean endings, but I wasn't so sure I'd be able to pull off the timing so that it was believable otherwise. Thank you!

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leafyaki December 3 2008, 16:03:10 UTC
Awwww! Great ending!! Gosh I was so worried, they were both SO SILLY until the end when they finally talked things out. Lovely story!!! :D

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molsymo December 3 2008, 22:36:51 UTC
Silly wasn't exactly what I was going for, but I think you're right. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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werewolfsfan December 3 2008, 16:17:14 UTC
Wow! Very creative and I could really feel Remus' bewilderment and Sirius' vulnerability. And who doesn't like a sexy climax!

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molsymo December 3 2008, 22:37:52 UTC
I'm glad it came through that well! Thanks for reading!

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chrliii December 3 2008, 16:40:32 UTC
Oh That's really good! I love it!
Greece! And confusion! And avoidance!
I love that it feels so real. And the ending! Really great story!

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molsymo December 3 2008, 22:35:44 UTC
Thank you so much! ♥

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