Day 21 - Fic: Team Canon: After All This, Won’t You Give Me A Smile?

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Canon
Title: After All This, Won’t You Give Me A Smile?
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, Dubcon, Anal, Forest Sex, Mentions of Prostitution, References to Pornography, Slightly Dark
Genre(s): Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Word Count: 7195
Summary: Set in PoA - For reasons he can’t quite explain, Remus spends much of his year as a teacher at Hogwarts

Comments

[serenity_ca4]

It's always nice to see an author put a fresh spin on this story, and I really appreciate that you stuck to your story and didn't try to retell J/Ks. That kept me intrigued and wanting to know what Remus was going to do next. I have to admit my eyes widened substantially at the idea of 33-year-old virgin Remus, and Madam Pomfrey offering herself was absolutely appalling and priceless. And of course, now I'm quite interested in the lie-low period and learning how Remus lost his memory in the first place (was it gradual or a PTSD kind of thing, or did he do it on purpose... has he remembered everything or is there more...) Sigh.. I suppose these things will only play out in my imagination.

Thanks for this story.

[rhye]

This is the first time I've read anything where Remus loses his memory, and I really like that twist. It adds a new component to their relationship. It was heartbreaking how Sirius had to leave so soon at the end. Thanks!

[inverts]

My favourite part of this fic, and also the moment that earned the best "WTF" reaction from me: Madam Pomfrey.

Well done. =]

[secretsolitaire]

Ooh, very intriguing. Usually it's Sirius that loses memories in Azkaban, so this was an interesting twist on that. I liked the moodiness of this, and the sense of mystery when the reader isn't quite sure who to believe.

[mieystrapurore]

Very original! I liked the loss of memory and virginity component. Can definitely picture Sirius' outburst at the end.