Day Nineteen - Fic: Team AU: Stars Shining Bright Above You

Oct 19, 2010 09:58

Team: AU
Title: Stars Shining Bright Above You
Rating: PG (Use of swearwords)
Warnings: None
Genre(s): Angst or Fluff/Romance
Word Count: 2304
Summary: When he dreams, he dreams in wide, sweeping epics or in perfect rosebuds of vignettes. The importance of dreams and how they can change you.
Notes: This fic is a complete hodge-podge of styles and heavy ( Read more... )

team au, rs_games 2010, fic

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eprime October 19 2010, 16:19:23 UTC
Aw, this was so neat! I love all the moments of thwarted anticipation at the end. Very nice way to work the prompt!

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floatingskyfish November 17 2010, 11:31:56 UTC
Thank you for your lovely comment (and rec!)

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iheartremus09 October 19 2010, 16:26:00 UTC
This was fascinating and it you really made the dream sequences feel real.You must me one of those people who really feels and remembers their dreams because the details were there. Sirius knowing that everyone at the amusement park was the loser of a competition for instance is a good example of that real dream feel. This made the whole story very engaging. There was a lot of momentum in those dreams and it made the reader really want to know what was going to happen next. It was a great story.

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floatingskyfish November 17 2010, 11:33:41 UTC
Thank you! I really appreciate the fact that you've really thought about my little fic.

On another note, I am indeed a person who really feels and remembers my dreams! However did you guess? :p

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ceredwensirius October 19 2010, 18:06:09 UTC
Very interesting piece. Love that Remus was the man of his dreams.

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floatingskyfish November 17 2010, 11:34:07 UTC
Thank you! I think Remus is the man of many people's dreams...

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rhye October 19 2010, 18:47:12 UTC
Another unique piece! I love the sense of fate. I especially appreciate Remus's humble position in this fic, lovely job!

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floatingskyfish November 17 2010, 11:34:33 UTC
Thank you for your wonderful comment!

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mommyconk October 19 2010, 21:43:25 UTC
awwww The reality of the dreams was lovely. I hardly remember mine, but my husband has vivid ones likes this, well hopefully not quite like this :)Very interesting and great use of the prompt.

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floatingskyfish November 17 2010, 11:34:55 UTC
Thank you very much!

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