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Fic - Team MWPP - Detached and Precious

May 10, 2008 22:20

Title: Detached and Precious
Team: MWPP
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Bad!sex. Object insertion.
Summary: Though I'm frightened by the word, I think it's time that it was heard
Prompt: Quote #7 ? "It's the fear of what comes after the doing that makes the doing hard to do. But you can almost always live with the consequences." (Angels in America)
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Comments 35

spacefragments May 11 2008, 05:16:11 UTC

:O love this. i was quite worried about remus!

red_squared July 3 2008, 01:47:29 UTC

Thank you, lovely!

Also, Remus has Sirius, and is therefore undeserving of any sympathy ;)

rev02a May 11 2008, 05:26:04 UTC

(1) Love the premise that a stressed Remus results in flukey magic, (2) The magic behind house hunting is freakin' awesome, (3) I LOVE YOUR R & S! They are both so damn on. Peter is so... pitiful. I love that his lack of a backbone is so well worked into your characterization. (4) Sirius writing into Witch Weekly made me laugh.

Bravo!

red_squared July 3 2008, 01:49:42 UTC

Eee! Thank you for your comment :)

(4) Sirius writing into Witch Weekly made me laugh.

It was actually supposed to be PlayWitch, but I had a brain spasm. Witch Weekly is probably the sort of magazine that Molly subscribes to :/

But I'm glad you enjoyed the fic!

chibitoaster May 11 2008, 12:04:03 UTC

yeah. this was awesome!

I'm surprised more people haven't commented.

Oh yeah, it was just posted yesterday. :P Still, it's an awesome story, and I love how you've got all of these rocks and bumps in their relationship that they have to work through. It made it feel a lot more real as I was reading it.

red_squared July 3 2008, 01:53:14 UTC

Thanks so much!

Dysfunctional SBRL is my favourite flavour of puppy love :D

I'm glad you liked it, too :)

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red_squared July 3 2008, 02:24:18 UTC

Thanks for your comment! I'm flattered that you thought their relationship came across as real :)

jadis31 May 11 2008, 14:19:31 UTC

Great work there! I think you captured the sort of anxiety and resentment that comes with having really smart friends very well. And I really *love* how you've written Peter in this. He's not in it much, but you see enough to really get him and the different pressures and emotions that play on his eventual betrayal. It was seriously impressive how much of his character and situation we saw in such limited parts.

red_squared July 3 2008, 02:32:14 UTC

Thanks for your comment!

I find Peter difficult to write, but I couldn't leave him out all together. I'm so pleased you found his characterisation convincing :)