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Day 14 - Fic: Team Canon: Of Times Remembered and Forgotten, and of Things Yet to Come

Oct 14, 2010 14:28

Team: Canon
Title: Of Times Remembered and Forgotten, and of Things Yet to Come
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: none
Genre(s): angst, humor
Word Count: 2170
Summary: Two lives, full of memories. Not all of them are good. But not all of them are bad. And the future is as yet unwritten.
Notes: I tried to make this a play on the phrase “a little death,” which ( Read more... )

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Comments 28

mommyconk October 14 2010, 21:16:18 UTC

Just beautiful. I love the way you took bits of all their memories and showed their complete lives. I feel like you know these men just by these snippets. great job

flaminia_x November 17 2010, 01:53:33 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad that a greater picture emerged from these tiny pieces of their lives! Glad you liked it!

phiso_kun October 14 2010, 21:19:18 UTC

GAH that ending made me a bit sad, but in an oddly happy way, if that makes any sense. I liked this, it's short and sweet but not at all shallow, and it made me think more about certain events that I had previously just brushed off.

Lovely job. :)

flaminia_x November 17 2010, 01:56:07 UTC

That's a great compliment, to be told that a fic made someone think. I'm so happy to hear you liked it, and that you found a deeper story in the bits and pieces here. Thanks so much for reading!

eprime October 14 2010, 23:09:22 UTC

Really nice. I liked the bits of their lives you chose to highlight, and I'm very happy they got to off into the afterlife together.

flaminia_x November 17 2010, 01:56:22 UTC

Thanks - me too!

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flaminia_x November 17 2010, 01:56:48 UTC

Haha - I understand. Still, at least they get to be together! Thanks for reading!

forsanethaec October 15 2010, 02:08:05 UTC

i'm crying!! one of the toughest things for me about pups and actually all the marauders is the inevitable sad ending, but i'm amazed how well you managed to make it seem like it was going to be okay even as they were dying. i was reading through their deaths and i kept thinking, it hurts to be on the downhill so much, this isn't fair! and then i got to the end and somehow everything was okay. a pleasant surprise and, coupled with how lovely and true the rest of it was, a tenacious bit of writing.

flaminia_x November 17 2010, 01:58:33 UTC

Wow, thanks! So glad you liked it. I had hoped that their being together in the afterlife would help get everyone through the fact that they both died in canon. I'm glad it turned out to be okay!