Day 13 - Fic: Team Canon: Je vois les autres

Oct 13, 2010 14:20

Team: Canon
Title: Je vois les autres
Rating: PG-13/light R
Warnings: ots and lots of swearing, more than a bit of sillyness, maybe-barely sex.
Genre(s): bit of Angst, bit of Hurt , bit of Romance, bit of Humour and a bit of Smut.
Word Count: 5044 words
Summary: In which Sirius likes to keep track of the things his friends do, and Remus doing ( Read more... )

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eprime October 13 2010, 19:32:51 UTC
I really enjoyed this! I love your description of the way their magic worked here, and Sirius being so oblivious and demanding that Remus stop doing what he was doing, and their whole unresolved mess, so fun! And, yay, for another happy canon fic! :)

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phiso_kun October 13 2010, 21:24:53 UTC
AHA Go Moony! I love it when he gets control. :)

This was a fantastic read. I love your description of how their magic words - I could see it in my mind's eye clear as day - and reading Sirius's twatty thought process makes it so much more endearing. (I imagine he'd just be a twat otherwise.)

Ooooh this makes my heart happy. <3

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ceredwensirius October 14 2010, 02:45:54 UTC
The magic here is very clever, I liked that it seemed to be an extension of themselves. Sirius was such a boy and so delightfully oblivious and willing to go with it in the end. Lovely piece.

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kingzgurl October 14 2010, 03:29:26 UTC
Your descriptions were brilliant and I loved the different take on their magic. Yay for oblivious!twat!Sirius and Remus controlling the show <3

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deathjunke October 14 2010, 04:13:09 UTC
hehehe :3 ♥
I giggled all the way through this. Sirius is so cute and irrational (and a tad psycho) when he's jealous. And i loved his study habits! In fact i totally endorse them! He and Remus should study more. ♥

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