Team: Canon Title: Patterns Rating: PG-13 Warnings: Genre(s): Angst Word Count: 2,619 Summary: Everything cycles. Everything repeats. And no one escapes their own nature. Notes: Prompt: 5
this is so perfectly canon it isn't even funny. it's like you took the canon story and made it fully real. it's what rowling should have done if she'd had the time.
the things you mentioned seemed so perfectly 'right.' for example, sirius's time in azkaban was described absolutely perfectly. it was the same for remus and the dissolvement of the order of the phoenix: The Order of the Phoenix dissolved so neatly and so quickly after Voldemort disappeared that it was almost like it had never existed at all. In the short period following Voldemort’s downfall, when dusk to dawn parties of celebration came into fashion, the Order did not get together for a dinner party, and there was not even the half-hearted suggestion of drinks. Even before the Longbottoms were attacked there was an awkwardness that passed between certain Order members when they happened to meet. Old habits had been restored and after the blood and fury of the war wizards went rushing back to the comfort of their families and jobs. Mundungus Fletcher, who had passed information that had been vital in saving many lives, was reduced to “that crook,” and Remus, who had done dangerous work for the Order was once again “the werewolf.” Not that this surprised Remus. After Halloween, he was past surprises. there was no way that could have been written better or more accurately.
the things you mentioned seemed so perfectly 'right.' for example, sirius's time in azkaban was described absolutely perfectly. it was the same for remus and the dissolvement of the order of the phoenix: The Order of the Phoenix dissolved so neatly and so quickly after Voldemort disappeared that it was almost like it had never existed at all. In the short period following Voldemort’s downfall, when dusk to dawn parties of celebration came into fashion, the Order did not get together for a dinner party, and there was not even the half-hearted suggestion of drinks. Even before the Longbottoms were attacked there was an awkwardness that passed between certain Order members when they happened to meet. Old habits had been restored and after the blood and fury of the war wizards went rushing back to the comfort of their families and jobs. Mundungus Fletcher, who had passed information that had been vital in saving many lives, was reduced to “that crook,” and Remus, who had done dangerous work for the Order was once again “the werewolf.” Not that this surprised Remus. After Halloween, he was past surprises.
there was no way that could have been written better or more accurately.
great job, mystery author.
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