Day Eleven - Fic: Team AU: Watching You

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Team AU
Title: Watching You
Prompt Number: PROMPT #12
Rating: PG-13
Genre(s): Romance
Pairing(s): Remus/Sirius, implied James/Lily
Summary: When Remus, a Firebender, arrives at Hogwarts, he only expects to learn how to firebend. He doesn’t expect to learn seven other lessons as well, nor does he expect to find them the most meaningful lessons of

Comments

[secretsolitaire]

Very sweet!

[charcharberry]

awww, i was at first weirded out by the firebending thing, but it made sense and fit in rather well with canon. my favourite scene was when remus came back and was all smokin' and sirius noticed, wish there could have been more of that. the last scene also took ym breath away. nice job!

[bookgrrrl2006]

oh that last line made me squee! i loved this story so much and not just because i am a huge fan of avatar: the last airbender. you combined the ideas perfectly but still managed to make this feel very mwpp.

it was all the little things that combined to work well. things like remus being noble enough to hurt himself and not others and sirius hating his parents and his parents hating him because he was different: “He thought it would teach me to hate fire, to be scared of it, but I didn’t hate fire. Fire was inside me, I knew that, but I learned to hate him. Hate everything about him.
that really worked.

[phiso_kun]

Oooh, I would have never thought to mix ATLA and the Marauders, but funnily enough I can see it. (And it worries me, knowing that those four can set things on fire without wands...hahahaha.) Interesting premise. :) And very sweet.

I like the idea of James the idiot trying to burn Lily's clothes off, but I wish she had done more than just slap him. XD

[kingzgurl]

I loved how the comedy played in this. James stupidly trying to burn off Lily's clothes and Sirius constantly setting things on fire is wonderful.