Day 6 - Fic: Team AU: Bridges I Have Burned

[rsgamesmods]

Team: AU
Title: Bridges I Have Burned
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: none
Genre(s): Angst
Word Count: 6280
Summary: Writing isn’t Sirius Black’s career of choice and he is struggling to meet the deadline for his upcoming novel. The new man that suddenly appears in his life provides a welcome distraction, but there is something mysterious about him that

Comments

[bookgrrrl2006]

this is really brilliant and i am shocked that there are not more comments. more people need to read this because it is truly amazing. hell i actually posted on my journal and anyone would read it i would recommend it to everyone.

your use of second person was really effective and came as a total surprise because i do not usually like that sort of thing, but you made it work totally. sirius as a writer with a clever little nod to him being rowling was really effective, but the way he almost destroyed his own life felt very canon.

i really don’t have words. i just loved this.

[remuslives23]

I usually find it quite hard to get into second person POV, but it was quite effective here. I want to smack your self-destructive Sirius so badly. I loved your premise so very much, loved your Sirius/Rowling nod, loved him being a bastard and stealing Remus' life, and loved the ending.

Great job with this!

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This is a really brilliant, new, painful way for Sirius to betray Remus, and I like where you went with it.

[eprime]

Oh, wow, I was on the edge of my seat through this. Sirius, you idiot! So glad they are getting a chance to start over! Great job!

[iheartremus09]

I have read a myriad of Remus-as-a-writer fics, but very rarely Sirius-as-a-writer. Yet this worked perfectly. Even the idea of betrayal was new and clever.

Thank you for giving us a happy ending, too.