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Day Five - Fic: Team AU: Storm in a Teacup

Oct 05, 2010 08:35

Team: AU
Title: Storm in a Teacup
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: hints of past (off screen) violence and assumed abuse; angst (including psychological angst)
Genre: hurt/comfort, angst
Word Count: ~10,2000
Summary: Recognition of our mortality, or that of the one we love, can be terrifying. And when Harry Potter is six-and-a-half years old, it threatens ( Read more... )

team au, rs_games 2010, fic

Comments 20

eprime October 5 2010, 15:11:43 UTC

Oh, I love this prompt. Your story was so painful and touching and real. Their love for each other and their fears were so tangible, and I could empathize with all three of them.

xkeijukainenx October 5 2010, 15:38:17 UTC

Oh my god. My heart just died a little bit. That was really, really beautiful and heartbreaking ... but really rang true and felt very real. Harry's monologue made me want to cry. :(

imaginesthesnow October 5 2010, 20:30:41 UTC

Holy crap, that was FANTASTIC. So well-done and so, so touching. I absolutely loved it.

inverts October 5 2010, 23:16:36 UTC

All right, so first, I will never get tired of Remus and Sirius raising Harry fics. Never.

Secondly, though, I love that this fic was much more than just another Remus and Sirius raising Harry fic. You handled it beautifully. Harry is a way more observant child than I was, but I don't think he's unrealistically observant in any way, just a smart kid. Little eavesdropper that he is!

This was wonderful and sad but also so sweet, thank you.

avaaricious October 6 2010, 10:17:53 UTC

All right, so first, I will never get tired of Remus and Sirius raising Harry fics. Never.

I second that motion :)

To you, mystery author, you tugged at my heartstrings So. Many. Times. I have a keen fondness for desperate!Sirius, and you did him so well. Remus was wonderful, and poor little Harry beautifully portrayed.

Everything about this, including the hopeful turn at the end is made of massive WIN.

phiso_kun October 6 2010, 21:44:06 UTC

HOW CUUUTE. Really, loved it so, so much.

I really like how you took a problem that happens with many couples (not just ones that involve werewolves) and examined not only how it was affecting the relationship, but the people around them, especially the children. How kids react to things like this, and how they see the cause and effect. I also like how this wasn't something easily solved, really, nor something that was solved by the end; it shows them evolving as a pair, and that's good to see. It's more realistic.

Also, awesome!Sirius knows about Horcuxes. Yeaaaaaah.

Good job!