Day 7 - Fic - Team Canon - Running Red

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Canon
Title: Running Red
Author: moonypearl
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: One or two bad words
Genre(s): Fluff/Romance
Word Count: about 1700
Summary: If one's life could be said to be a river, then Remus's would have run red.
Prompt: Red, Life/Strength
Poem credit: Pablo Neruda

Comments

[flaminia_x]

I don't know why, but Dreamwidth is not letting me in to see either fic. It keeps asking me to log in, which it has never done before. Thoughts?

[rsgamesmods]

Fixed it!!!!

[hrymfaxe]

I really liked this and loved your use of the prompt colour. You have a way with words that is very appealing. Remus' jumping logic when he unravels what has happened on the night of the prank felt very real, especially this: Sirius of the split lip.

Also this observation: He'd found his center in a room caked with his old blood and dust, in a room with a traitor and three still-children, in a room lanced by the wind that breathed through the floorboards. was amazing, and really brought the story full circle.

Very well done!

[bookgrrrl2006]

OMG, but that was fabulous! What a great use of the prompt (or both prompts) too. Your use of the color red was absolutely stunning and whether it was blood or Gryffindor banners it was never without meaning.

This was really well-written, too.

[ceredwensirius]

That was beautifully done! Love the use of the color and the poem. Your writing is so lovely, lyrical and evocative! Thank you for sharing!

[strippedlove]

This was beautiful! The usage of the prompt was great, both the color and the poem. The writing style was very descriptive and poetic, and the whle concept of red was wonderfuul. The last prt matched perfectly with the last piece of the poem. I loved this! <3