DAY 5 - Fic: Team AU: The Bite That Bleeds

Oct 05, 2009 19:07

Team: AU
Title: The Bite That Bleeds
Author: coutt_lemon
Rating: Very light PG-13
Warnings: Mild Swearing, slight violence
Genre(s): Romance/Angst
Word Count: 3,775
Summary: “My life has been a very filled one, full of love, lust, pain and death. I’ve done so many things I’m ashamed of and a lot that I’ve never been more proud of.”
Prompt: Love/Read more... )

rs_games 2009, team au, fic

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bookgrrrl2006 October 6 2009, 00:23:34 UTC
What an unusual and enthralling story! I have never read anything quite like it. The style was really unique.

Your Remus was darling and very, very brave and giving, but I really wish he could have been with Sirius at the end. Still, I admired him greatly.

This may sound crazy, but it reminded me of a Decembrists song.

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iheartremus09 October 6 2009, 19:44:00 UTC
That was really AU in every sense of the word and I mean that in a good, good way because it was really original. Despite the heavy ending it was really interesting and Remus' voice came through loud and clear as being very real. I liked this a lot, though I hated what happed. You're a very good writer, who ever you are.

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sandybeth162 October 7 2009, 22:50:45 UTC
Dark and depressing, this fic really worked. It was emo in a really fascinating and effective way. I also liked Remus in it. He was cool and very giving. He really was a gryffindor, wasn't he?

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werewolfsfan October 9 2009, 17:05:38 UTC
This was an unusual AU and a creative premise. But you really should have had a beta. There are numerous spelling and grammar mistakes. Also, I found parts of this confusing. For instance the first mentions of a "show" in the Shrieking Shack. Even though the story is marked AU, that was very confusing until your explanation much later in the tale and even then, I didn't feel the explanation was plausible.
Your story did end on a high note though as Remus' goodbye to Sirius was very touching.

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deathjunke October 12 2009, 21:40:26 UTC
Poor Remus, no luck at all.
First a werewolf now a vamp.

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