Day 1 - Fic: Team Canon: It Was Fascination, I Know

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Canon
Title: It Was Fascination, I Know
Author: crooked
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None (that I can think of anyway)
Genre(s): Romance/Fluff
Word Count: 4842
Summary: Over the years, Sirius develops a fascination with watching Remus sleep.
Prompt: Red/Picture

Comments

[werewolfsfan]

Sigh! Sooooooooooooooo cute and boyish! How did you know that I adore boyish?

[crooked]

thanks so much! i adore boyish myself, and i never can seem to write these two without going that route. ;D

♥

[hrymfaxe]

What a cute way of telling the development of their relationship; through missed opportunities to watch Remus Lupin sleep! :) This was sweet and funny. These two lines especially had me laughing: everything gets too messy for his pubescent brain to cope with. and (Later, Sirius will count it as their unofficial first kiss.)! Wonderful!

[crooked]

thank you! i'm so glad you enjoyed it and that sirius didn't come across as a total creepster! :D

<33

[calembours]

Ohhhh, you wrote an aftermath bit to the animagi reveal~! That hardly ever happens! :D I thought this was a really sweet fic, and that poor Sirius has been trying to catch Remus sleeping all those years, only to discover that Remus has probably been watching him sleep all that time! You wrote such a delicate UST - more of a romantic tension than a sexual, but it was so very very lovely. ♥ Well done!

[crooked]

i don't think i've written much of it before, but i really stuck that aftermath to the animagi reveal bit in because i adore remus interacting with padfoot for some reason. but yes! i was trying to imply that remus had been watching sirius sleep all that time, so you get the golden ticket for mentioning that :D

thanks so much! i'm very glad you liked it <33

[deathjunke]

I absolutely love the irony at the end and the almost there tension with Sirius. This was such a fun read!

oh and Big Gay Conclusion had me snorting hot coffee out of my nose *Very painful i assure you* that was too funny

[crooked]

ahaha i was stupidly amused by Big Gay Conclusion myself, considering i wrote it :P

thank you very much! i'm really pleased that you liked this <333

[mysecretashes]

Oh, this was so adorable! It gave me warm fuzzies. :D *squishes them* Sirius's determination to watch Remus sleep was endearing and sweet, and I love his reasons why he wanted to. And then when he realized that Remus had been watching him sleep - awwww! :)

[crooked]

aww thank you! i'm so glad that you liked it! oh boys ♥