Fic - Team: MWPP - Come in from the Cold

[rsgamesmods]

Title: Come in from the Cold
Team: Team MWPP
Rating: Rish
Warnings: Language, boy!love, angst, poetry disguised in prose, sexual themes, a stolen scene from an old movie I can not remember
Summary: Things might have had a chance to alright, until he went and started to play the piano.
Prompt: The hands playing the piano
Genre(s): Angst

Comments

[mindabbles]

This is so unique. I enjoyed the way it reads like a poem and the somewhat spare feel of it was very pretty.

[tourdefierce]

Thank you. I was worried how it would be received but this ebing the first comment eased my mind just a little bit.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[spacefragments]

mmmm. i want to eat this up with chocolate. it's so-- i don't know, sensual. and the language is lovely.

[tourdefierce]

Hehe. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for commenting.

I really love writing them this way, because they practically write themselves here.

[biffes]

This was a difficult read with the constant POV changes, but it also was very deep. I liked the angsty tone & sadness that seems be always present. You mixed wonderfully the calmness(silence) and tension. Really nice!

[tourdefierce]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I know the POV changes were difficult to follow but I'm glad you were able to get past it. Thanks for commenting.

[tourdefierce]

Oh! I'm sorry you had no idea what was happening, that saddens me.

Thank you for taking the time to comment though.

[tourdefierce]

Why thank you! It makes me giggle.

[werewolfsfan]

I agree with the other posts. This is a unique format and the words flow sensually. It needs to be read more than once to make sense but it is all about feelings instead. That is immediately apparent. Good job.

[tourdefierce]

Thank you very much. I know it's an active read but sometimes they just get out of hand.

Thanks for commenting.