Fic - Team: MWPP - Two Boys, An Apple Tree (a Lie)

[rsgamesmods]

Title: Two Boys, An Apple Tree (a Lie)
Team: Team MWPP
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Depictions of homophobia, extremely vague sexual innuendo, and language. Mostly language. That Sirius, man, he's got a mouth on him.
Summary: He told himself how it wasn't lying. He told himself how they wouldn't understand.
Prompt: "It's not lying if they make you lie.

Comments

[tourdefierce]

Heartbreaking.
I love the formatting here though, with the flash backs.

And Sirius' character was so spot on, playful and just fucking painful in every since It's not lying

wonderful job. The ending was perfect.

[fera_festiva]

Oh, this was beautiful. Wonderfully melancholy and bittersweet and, and, oh, just beautifully written. My heart is breaking!

... Although I did LOL over McGonagall and the catnip. :)

[forest_rose]

That was so beautifully written, and sad. I loved the details in your writing. And McGonagall and the catnip was a great image!

[secretsolitaire]

Really well done, particularly your use of the prompt. This fic had a raw, bittersweet sort of feel to it worked beautifully with the theme.

[werewolfsfan]

Well done altogether and a good use of the prompt. The details are great, like the apples and the catnip prank.