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Day 2 - Fic: Team Place: They don't love you like I love you

Oct 04, 2016 07:19

Team: Place

Title: They don't love you like I love you

Rating: G

Warnings: slight mentions of homophobia and dysphoria

Genre: Fluff, Romance

Word Count: 5800

Summary: Hospital receptionist, Remus Lupin usually invites superheroes as guests for the kids. That is, until he gets the unusual request of inviting villain The Canis.

Notes: I would love to ( Read more... )

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Comments 8

museinabsentia October 4 2016, 14:38:09 UTC

Okay, I'm not going to lie. Taking the superhero trope and turning it on its ear so that there is no world saving, just visiting children in a hospital is simply adorable. And I love that Sirius was a villain, not a hero. And somehow he was still good, anyway. And oblivious Remus. So, so oblivious (one of my favorite varieties of Remus). This was an adorable little story. Lovely job!

museinabsentia October 4 2016, 21:20:55 UTC

Well, I enjoyed it to begin with, but it does make a bit more sense now. Love the way that Sirius simply accepted Remus, no questions, and was ready to just defend him. And of course Lockheart was really the bad guy. I mean, who isn't ready to believe that guy committing crimes just to uphold his reputation.

Even more lovely now that I've read the whole thing.

bearshorty October 4 2016, 18:03:46 UTC

Your Remus was adorable. And so were supporting characters, especially Harry and Draco and the twins.

And Sirius is a fun villain!

rsgamesmods October 4 2016, 18:32:55 UTC

We messed up! Because of a coding error, only the first half of this fic got posted this morning. Please come back and check out the second half when you have a moment!

bookgrrrl2006 October 4 2016, 19:12:55 UTC

this was better than deadpool. way better. and i loved deadpool. i also really love gilderoy lockheart so double bless you for including him in this truly hilarious story. remus's voice was delightful and sirius as the canis was simply superb. i also love the discreet nod to canon by making him a villain who really is not much of a villain.

clovenbuttercup October 5 2016, 09:14:23 UTC

I enjoyed this; like bookgrrrl2006, I liked the use of Sirius as a villain who really isn't one, just how he is in the canon. I don't like Lockhart, so it was good to see him taken down a peg or two.

huldrejenta October 6 2016, 14:47:41 UTC

Really adorable and fun fic - I've left a longer comment on AO3 :)