Day 18 - Team Moon - Fic: They Call It Black Fire
Team: Moon
Title: They Call It Black Fire
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Highlight to read *Mentions of past minor character death. One instance of homophobic language.*
Word Count: 8000
Summary: "The car is travelling west. There's dust packed in the grooves of its tyres. The road is an endless, undulating line and the sky arches blue over both horizons ( Read more... )
Title: They Call It Black Fire
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Highlight to read *Mentions of past minor character death. One instance of homophobic language.*
Word Count: 8000
Summary: "The car is travelling west. There's dust packed in the grooves of its tyres. The road is an endless, undulating line and the sky arches blue over both horizons ( Read more... )
i have never been to australia, but you made me feel like i was actually there. and now i want to go. this was like that book 'the thorn birds' in that it really made the landscape and the setting a viable part of the story to the point that it would hardly work in another setting. i an guessing that you really are australia, but i know that for now that's a mystery.
you really worked magic with non-magic au, too. it was amazing how all the characters just felt 'right' in all ways. i liked how you worked in sirius being falsely imprisoned and who was really at fault. i also have to personally thank you for not making snape the bad guy. i have a soft spot for snape. james was really great here, too, and was harry and lily.
it was beautifully written and the ending was particularly lovely. this bit just made my heart sing: he tilts his head the smallest fraction and sirius is there, his lips crushing against remus', hot and chafed and welcoming. with a soft moan, remus licks into sirius' mouth that has always tasted of home and lets himself drown.
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