Day 11 - Fic: Team Moon: fell in love once and almost completely
Team: moon
Title: fell in love once and almost completely
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Some injury, non-graphic death (not of main characters, occurs pre-story)
Word Count: 4,424
Summary: When Remus is four, his father kills a werewolf in front of him. Eleven years later, he meets an unfamiliar boy with a scarred face and a secret.
Prompt: 51 - "There ( Read more... )
Title: fell in love once and almost completely
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Some injury, non-graphic death (not of main characters, occurs pre-story)
Word Count: 4,424
Summary: When Remus is four, his father kills a werewolf in front of him. Eleven years later, he meets an unfamiliar boy with a scarred face and a secret.
Prompt: 51 - "There ( Read more... )
This story was so very very clever. All the characters are still themselves but with a perfect variation - what Remus would be like if he was not a werewolf (still loving chocolate, the ultimate romantic gift), what Sirius would be like if he was a werewolf (still himself but with weariness and pain), what James would be like without Sirius' influences that edged him on, what Peter would be like when closer to two other friends and especially James (loved devil on his shoulder line) and even what Snape would be like ( still despised but having a study friend in Remus and not an enemy of James since Sirius was the one who started that emnity. And yet still resentful and petty and very himself).
I also liked Remus' relationship with his parents and the undercurrents about his Dad.
And of course, I loved the perfect kissing scene that made me weak in the knees - just so beautifully written and tugging at my heart.
This story will go to my bookmarks because even though I just finished reading it, I already want to reread it again and again. Kudos.
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