Day 28 - Team Remus - Fic: Between the Lines
Team: Remus
Title: Between the Lines
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: horror, canon character deaths, werewolf conversion of five year old Remus, sexual references, angst
Word Count: 10,136
Summary: Remus had difficulty explaining his history to Sirius until Sirius suggested he write it down. Remus expressed himself in fairy tale form, using blood magic to ( Read more... )
Title: Between the Lines
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: horror, canon character deaths, werewolf conversion of five year old Remus, sexual references, angst
Word Count: 10,136
Summary: Remus had difficulty explaining his history to Sirius until Sirius suggested he write it down. Remus expressed himself in fairy tale form, using blood magic to ( Read more... )
“You’re all amazing!” Remus exclaimed. He couldn’t stop looking at Sirius or touching his hair. “You’re amazing,” he told Sirius with heartfelt gratitude and then kissed him the same way.
“Verbal praise will be sufficient for me and Peter thanks Moony,” James quipped.
And this part was especially powerful and sad:
Dog was enraged by Moony’s refusal to make him a werewolf and turned against their friends for advice they gave. First, he hunted down Stag and fed him to the Darkness. Then he tore Flower out of the soil by her roots and cast her into the Darkness too. Instead of offering Rat to the Darkness, Dog ate him and left nothing but a tiny toe. Moony knew he’d be next. He ran and hid. He began to wonder. Had Dog served the Darkness all along? Had he desired the werewolf and not Moony, hoping to become an even more formidable weapon against the Light? Moony had every reason to be glad he did not grant Dog’s wish yet his heart remained sore.
Really effective way of telling Remus's and Sirius's story, and the subplot about Remus turning Sirius into a were-dog was a nice way to explain Remus's guilt and fear over Tonks's pregnancy. Well done.
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