Day 14 - Team Sirius - Fic: Howl

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Sirius
Title: Howl
Rating: R
Warnings: Blood/blood consumption
Word Count: 16,296
Summary: Everyone knows that the Black family is cursed and that Sirius Black is a traitor.
Prompt: 45 - "Every fairy tale had a bloody lining. Every one had teeth and claws." ~ Alice Hoffman

Comments

[bookgrrrl2006]

“i love you,” sirius whispers as he clasps their hands tightly together, kissing each one of remus’ knuckles. remus can’t help but smile in return. he leans in and brushes a kiss against sirius’ forehead, and then each one of his shut eyelids.

“i uncurse you,” remus whispers, and he doesn’t know why he says it, but the words come unbidden.

they fall asleep, tucked against each other, and for the first time in all of his life, sirius black dreams a dream that belongs to him.

omg! this has to be one of the best fan fics i have ever read. seriously, it was fantastic. such a great story. even if i had no idea who sirius and remus were meant to be i would have loved it. what i mean by that is that it totally works on its own apart from harry potter.

that said your characters were perfectly in character. i loved them both and you managed to make them both traditional r/s and very much believably au at the same time. you're a very good writer, too.

the story within a story was wonderful, too. i loved how it paralleled what was happening with sirius and remus but also how it really emphasized the theme of the whole games. it worked so well with your prompt, too.

i have you more than the supposed nine points. i hope the mods will let you have the extra.