Day 1 - Fic: Team Sirius: Well Weathered Tales

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Sirius
Title: Well Weathered Tales
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Some very brief, vaguely written sex
Word Count: 4,058
Summary: During his last months at Grimmauld Place Sirius is plagued by dreams and becomes a little too interested in hearing about the weather.
Prompt: 21 - Poppy field (picture)

Comments

[llassah]

Oh god, I love this. Quietly and powerfully told, with this subtlety of tone that works so well in this half life. As with all the best r/s fics, you leave just enough hope in the end to make it truly heartbreaking. Bravo.

[olivier_dathos]

Beautiful beautiful beautiful; this is so sad, particularly the last line, but I absolutely loved it! Loved the repitition but difference in each dream and also the perfection of the different characters you managed to give a glimpse to for such brief moments. A very real representation of the fixation of entrapment...Loved it :)

[so_jayded]

That completely broke my heart. Your prose is gorgeous. <3

[evening12]

I love how easily this story could fit in canon. I'm surprised at how much weather can become a focal point of a story and be interesting.

[thesiriusmoon]

Oh lordy... My heart! Why must this beautiful pairing be so tragic? *sniffle*
That was really beautifully written. You captured the period perfectly, and the dream sequences were a fantastic touch.
Now just write another one where he comes back and Remus takes Padfoot to play in the park.