Day 23 - Fic: Team Sirius: 500 Miles (I'm Coming Home to You)

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Sirius
Title: 500 Miles (I'm Coming Home to You)
Rating: R
Warnings: AU, strong language, sexual situations, past Remus/Tonks and present Remus/OMC, un-chronological flashbacks
Word Count: 13,697
Summary: When Sirius Black left Manchester six years ago for a record deal, he also left behind Remus, his longtime boyfriend. Now they have a

Comments

[secretsolitaire]

I loved this! I think we can see plenty of Sirius even from Remus's POV, because you can see his heart coming through even when Remus is trying to pretend he doesn't see it. I loved the charity event, and Sirius telling Remus later that he is the music. *melts*

[bearshorty]

I could really follow Remus on his mental journey here - of a man not over his love and trying hard when he sees him again. You really took us into his head. And when they got back together it felt like both earned it. And when Sirius asks to get to know his son, that is really a great way to end it. It was a great AU world. Great story.

[bookgrrrl2006]

that was sweet and rather rockin'. i really liked it. i really liked how you made it filled with sirius despite being from remus's point of view. that really worked very well. i really liked sirius's character too. he was both canon and au. good job, mystery author.

[only_veetee]

I absolutely adored this story! Non-magical AUs usually aren't my cup of tea, but this was incredibly well-written. I loved how Teddy was woven into the story. I'm a huge sucker for any story where Sirius gets to interact with Teddy. I just love how all the relationships translated and were developed. It was great.

[remuslives23]

God, I can't even speak. I cried pretty much all the way through it. Beautiful writing - your phrasing was exquisite, beautiful emotion - I ached for them, beautiful story.