Day 1 - Fic: Team Magic: A World Gone Mad

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Magic
Title: A World Gone Mad
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: wanking, frotting, brief oral, some foul language because well, they’re teenage boys.
Word Count: 18,404
Summary: The realization that he may have not so platonic feelings for Remus lead Sirius to some realizations about himself and his family, and maybe, to start healing.
Notes: Without

Comments

[cevennes]

Oh, oh, my gosh, but this is utterly brilliant. I love your Sirius and the way you get into his head and show us all the little things crawling around in there, every insecurity and uncertainty and the old pain that's been gnawing at him for so long; that Remus acts as an unwitting catalyst to spark his growth is so, so powerful, and I feel like both of them have taken a solid step toward the great beast of maturity by the end of the fic. It's beautifully written, and Sirius' dialogue at the end--the way he opens up a part of himself to Remus he's maybe never busted open for anyone else before--is fantastic. You wrote it so well that I just ached for him.

The humor and the pranks woven in are a total delight, and they really added to the atmosphere of magic--the whole thing is threaded through with it, and your language is gorgeous! I swear I could see the potion and James' blue face, poor thing. I really wish I could find a coherent way to tell you how much the ending resonated with me, but I'm coming up with a whole lot of gushing and little of substance. There's such a feeling of growing up and healing and learning to trust and love and be whole again, together, that I love love love. You've written them stronger than they were, and it's so wonderful to read that.

Basically: I love this. It's powerful and moving and funny and full up with pain and love and atonement and growth. I'm so happy I got to read this; it's entirely, entirely amazing.

[museinabsentia]

Thank you so much, I’m so glad you liked this. It was a great deal of fun to try and get inside Sirius’ head and find all those little things to share. And I’m glad that you got them growing up, because, honestly, if love doesn’t help you grow at least a little it’s not really love. I’m very happy that that worked for you.