Fic - "Nocturnal Admissions," 1/1

[tonights]

Title: Nocturnal Admissions 1/1
Pairing Rorschach/Dan in the early days of their partnership
Rating: NC-17. Yes, it is porn. Porny porn porn.
Disclaimer: Alan Moore would be rolling over in his grave, if he was in his grave. PLEASE DON'T KILL ME, ALAN MOORE. IT'S ALL DONE OUT OF LOVE.
Word Count: 2289
Summary: This was originally done for the

Comments

[dreamiflame]

"Walter jerked his legs off the bed and pulled his pants back up over his hips, averting Daniel's eyes"

I'm pretty sure Daniel has to be the one averting Daniel's eyes. Maybe avoiding?

Other than that, this was awesome. I love how Walter and Rorschach were both there in his head.

[tonights]

Ohh, balls! That's what I get for writing this in the wee hours of the morning. Fixed and thanks for pointing it out!

[dreamiflame]

No problem. Starting to think I'm the grammar nazi of the fandom, though... *hides*

[tonights]

Aww, it's ok! That wasn't grammar so much as it was "Meryl accidentally used a fucking totally wrong word just because it started with the same letter and she was tired." XD

[frostious]

"1/1"

WH

WHY

YOU

HOW CAN YOU

DON'T DO THIS

AAAAA

Shit, this was SO GOOD. I loved the Walter/Rorschachness, the humour and and I actually went "ohhh shit" when you revealed Daniel thought he was dreaming.

SO. GOOD. Y-you're making me want to draw smut, dammit! I suck at smut! Stop it!

[tonights]

Dude, do you think I'm going to *discourage* you from drawing smut about a fic I wrote? I SO AM NOT.

YOUNG AND SEXY MAN PORN, DRAW YOU SOME! XD

Thank you so much for the compliments. It's apparently been decided by committee that there will be a sequel.

[cleoroses]

Holy shit.

You win. This was AMAZING.

goddamnitI'mnotsupposedtoevenlikethispairingwtf

[tonights]

THEN MY WORK HERE IS DONE - oh wait, no it's not. THE PORN IS JUST BEGINNING MUAHAHAHAHA.

Thanks. <3

[otakulord89]

NGAH!!! That was hot!

[tonights]

There may be a sequel! In fact, there is probably going to be a sequel! In fact, the wheels in my head are already turning, but they're having a hard time coming up with anything except "Let us write more porn please." So I just have to come up with a framework to put the porn in. XD

[lady_wormtongue]

Remember, porn in a frame is called art. ;)

Loved this -- I was wondering why Daniel was being so cocky ballsy confident... him thinking it was a dream was a great idea. Really well written too! I'm looking forward to the sequel. :)