"Just A Dream" Star Trek [Kirk/McCoy]

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Title: Just A Dream 1/2
Author: loveable_me_87
Pairing: McCoy/Kirk
Rating: PG-13 (?)
Words: 2832
Disclaimer: *le sigh* Don't own it.
Summary: From THIS PROMPT at st_xi_kink.
Kirk is kidnapped by someone who tortures him, not only physically, but they have a way of mentally making a person believe something happened. They implant Kirk with a horrible memory of Bones being

Comments

[beautyandbanana]

Oh Ji. So Sad, but so good! I loved the use of second person!

[rps_lizardspock]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it.

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ihu

[almightychrissy]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Oh Kirk, so broken. I can't believe it stops there. I try not to be the kind of reviewer who is like "OMG MORE WORK FOR MY AMUSEMENT" but I really must say that if you wanted to write more, I am sure it would not go opposed by me or by anyone else.

Very nice work.

[rps_lizardspock]

I'm working on another part. I hadn't intended to, but kicksav29 insisted. I can't promise anything great, or that I'll finish it, but I'm gonna try =)

I'm glad you liked it. <3

[mijan]

I love the style you use for this piece. The perspective... damn. Nice.

[rps_lizardspock]

Thanks so much! I've been reading A Million Little Pieces by James Frey and I was inspired by his style of writing.

I'm glad you liked it =)

[mijan]

Ah, I've not read that book. Either way, the style certainly worked for this story, and I enjoyed it very much. Hope you write another!

[rps_lizardspock]

It's a good book. *nods*

There's going to be at least one more part (a part I hadn't intended to write, but was convinced to write by kicksav29 lol). It'll be up soonish.

Oh, and your icon amuses me =D

[whoi_amthisweek]

I normally don't like things written in this tense/perspective...but I actually really enjoyed this. Very, very good!

[rps_lizardspock]

I'm glad you liked it, despite your dislike for the style!!! =D