There is a certain freelance editor on Facebook who does very well, and good for him. He lives off his editing. He thinks he is a great editor, and others think he is a great editor. I do not think he is a great editor. I own a book he edited, and I found so many errors in it I could hardly believe someone paid him to edit it. He and I
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Disagree on 5 and 8; semi-agree on 3 (setting it off with commas is fine if it’s her only book, but you need BOTH of them) and 7 (I think the “example...” style is also fine, but it needs a trailing space); agree on the rest.
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8. "Sentences" is plural. Something plural is not "one" reason but more than one.
3. You misunderstand me. We agree.
7. I was taught in school the spaces are needed. Since then standards have declined.
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8. Linking verbs must only agree with their subjects, not their complements.
7. Even if “...” is a lesser standard, there are still better and worse ways to execute it.
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8. Let me try again, with a simpler example. If I say, "Cars are a cause of pollution," I am being grammatically incorrect. If I turn it around, the error becomes more readily apparent: "A cause of pollution are cars." Perhaps you can see that is not correct? A grammatically correct construction may be reversed and remain correct. "A cause of pollution is car exhaust." Or: "Cars are among the causes of pollution." Nouns and verbs must agree.
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8. No, that sentence is fine. Your turned-around version simply introduces a separate error: the subject and verb do not agree. “A cause of pollution is cars” is fine, and I think most thoughtful writers would write it before writing “A cause of pollution is the car.” (The latter is also fine, and I don’t mean to suggest that writers who’d write it are not thoughtful; I’m simply thinking only of thoughtful writers rather than anyone who’s ever put a pen to paper.) There is no rule that all nouns must agree with the verb-only the subject must. It is perfectly acceptable to say, e.g., “He loves strawberries,” even though “strawberries” is a plural noun. That copulative “to be ( ... )
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8. You do misunderstand me, though you think you do not. I never said all nouns must agree with the verb; only a simpleton would think that. Again, might does not make right. It is a wonder to me that grammar is still taught, since no one cares about it.
"You can't educate the ignorant," my father used to say, and he is continually proved right.
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I do not wish to be obnoxious; I will say that as long as you know what you are doing, anything goes. That has always been my position, which any look back at my countless debates will reveal. You clearly know what you are doing, to the extent that you have been told what to do and choose to disregard it anyway. You are not ignorant. I am sorry I said you were. I simply tire of these discussions (I don't mean with you), which are almost always fruitless.
Yes, it is very popular to say "Cars are a cause of pollution," et cetera. But let's dig deeper, shall we? In these cases, another verb is being lost. Using "are" is intellectual shorthand, laziness if you will. It is meant that cars constitute a cause. To say "Cars constitute a cause of pollution" would be grammatically correct. No one wants to be bothered thinking long or hard enough to choose the correct verb. "Are" is used instead as a catch-all substitute. No one minds except ( ... )
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