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TSCC ficlet: The Grocery List

Jun 05, 2008 06:04

Title: The Grocery List
Author: Roxy Bisquaint
Characters: Sarah and Derek, minor appearance by Cameron
Rating: Teen
Word Count: ~500
Summary: He wanted it. She gave it to him.
Notes: I hope you don't hate me for his one.

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sarah connor, sarah connor chronicles, my tscc fic, fanfic, derek reese

Comments 30

quiet_elle June 5 2008, 11:48:25 UTC

That was brilliant :) Such a great beginning and i didnt even see the ending coming :)

roxybisquaint June 5 2008, 14:19:02 UTC

i didnt even see the ending coming

Oh cool. I was wondering if it would be a surprise or not. Thanks so much for the feedback.

nanewt011 June 5 2008, 12:48:17 UTC

Yep, Sarah is a prickly one. Anyone taking her on should expect a few bumps in the road. Wonderful, sexy and funny!

roxybisquaint June 5 2008, 14:20:07 UTC

Seriously. Derek deserved to get his ass kicked, right? Thanks for the comments. BTW, your dancing Cameron icon is cracking me up.

twasadark June 5 2008, 13:03:29 UTC

LOL - way cute and sexy, too!

roxybisquaint June 5 2008, 14:20:53 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the comment :)

dracaspina June 5 2008, 13:32:05 UTC

*chuckles* Derek does have a "by any means" policy towards getting the mission done. That's probably the last time that he'll try seducing Sarah to get his way!

(I fell on the floor when I saw this icon, btw!)

roxybisquaint June 5 2008, 14:22:18 UTC

That's probably the last time that he'll try seducing Sarah to get his way!
I don't think there's any way he could attempt it again after that ;)
Thanks for reading.

sabaceanbabe June 5 2008, 14:28:21 UTC

Oh, man! Poor Derek! Should've had Cameron take him to the hospital! :P

This was awesome. From the initiating sex while (I assume) loading a weapon to the attempted pocket picking while the "victim" is distracted to the ignominious end. Love it.

roxybisquaint June 5 2008, 14:52:03 UTC

Oh I think Cameron would be content to watch Derek die. ;)
And yes, Sarah was loading a gun at her dresser. I wasn't sure if that would come through with the way I broke it up.

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it. You know, you actually should get some credit here. I toyed with this idea for a while, but hadn't done anything with it. After you called for more fic I finally wrote it. So thanks for motivating me :)

BTW - love your icon!

sabaceanbabe June 5 2008, 14:56:58 UTC

Hee! And here I had that thought -- I poked her and she wrote more fic! -- and then thought, nah. It's not really all about me. :P