The Atwood DITFT: Generation 1, Chapter 2

Dec 08, 2011 12:29


Author's Note: Hi guys! Welcome back to the Atwood DITFT! Okay, I know I'm really spamming the chapters lately, but let's just say it's either this or write my research paper, and I like to procrastinate. So. Without further ado, another chapter of the Atwoods! :D


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tws1996 December 8 2011, 20:17:25 UTC
UNICORN FTW!
Glad Nick's got his farm and pets for company though, and I love the house.
Great Chapter :D

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roxmorgirl December 9 2011, 00:35:03 UTC
Lol, I was SO excited when I saw him!!! I just had to xD

Thank you! :3 Pets make everything better, lol! So glad you enjoyed <3

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kcrockssims December 8 2011, 21:37:41 UTC
Your continuity is really great, sometimes when people write drama with Sims they forget that real people grieve for more than two days :P

I liked the struggle between the need for money and the memories.

I think you really overreacted when you panicked about writing drama, you're very talented at it :)

Not looking forward to Pheonix or Katie kickin' the bucket :/ it's not going to be pretty

Also, UNICORN! Loved the little bit of humour at the end xD

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roxmorgirl December 9 2011, 00:38:26 UTC
Aw, thank you! <3 I was going for that exact idea when I wrote this. I always think it's silly when sims get over their parents' deaths after a few days! Lol. Thank you for saying that, I'm happy to know I accomplished what I wanted to xD

And lol, thank you! That's so sweet of you :3

Ugh, me either :( Phoenix still has a fair amount of time in her adult bar, but Katie's an elder.... :'( It hasn't happened in my game yet, and I have no idea how I'll write it when it does xD I might cry lol.

Haha I'm glad xD I love unicorns, they're so fun! I hope I find another one sometime when I have more of a chance to fiddle around with them, haha!

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tale_legacy December 8 2011, 21:43:28 UTC
Aww, you write so beautifully and filled with such emotion <3 Everytime he mentiond the past I feel my heart clench <3

Great chap :)

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roxmorgirl December 9 2011, 00:38:59 UTC
Thank you so much! <3 I was definitely aiming to make Nick relatable and have his emotions come through, I'm so glad it worked :)

Thank you <3

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aspenchronicles December 9 2011, 00:49:50 UTC
Haha evil stalker unicorns! I think Katie is fast becoming my favourite dog ever, well aside from my real fur baby here at home lol! I love the slow reveal of his memories too, it's like untangling a web of history! Great chapter, I really look forward to more!

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roxmorgirl December 14 2011, 00:02:50 UTC
Lol yes they will getttt youuuu >:D Haha. I love Katie <3 Aww but I'm sure a real-life dog is much better, lol! ;) Thank you! I was hoping to accomplish that :) Thanks so much!

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rosie_diamond December 9 2011, 22:35:44 UTC
I thought unicorn was white, and not black XD Lol
The chapter is very well written! I want more! But I don't mind a Richmond chapter ;D
Great chapter! :)

Oh by the way, I didn't comment on the Carraways, because I am going to start to read at the beginning. ;P

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roxmorgirl December 14 2011, 00:04:00 UTC
Haha yeah no kidding xD I guess it can vary, apparently.
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed! :D Richmonds soon ;)
Thank you!

And oh! Ok! Yay, archives, eh? xD Haha no pressure to comment, I'm just glad you're reading ^_^

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