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[roundeyecharlie]

I have new aspirations. I want to be a POET! Check out my stuff:

Popcorn!
Popping popping
heating heating
getting butter put on getting butter put on
getting salt put on getting salt put on
getting eaten getting eaten
digestion! digestion!

^ Thats not even my best ^

Eyes
What are eyes?
I know they look
I know they see
I know people put glasses on them
I know that people use eyedrops for them
I know that they look
I know that they see
But what are EYES?!?

Those ones were pretty traditional.. Heres an ABSTRACT!

BLANKETS ARE SOFT BUT THORNS ARENT
WHY DO WE FEEL IF I CANT FEEL
I THINK I STAYED IN THE COLD WATER TOO LONG
BUT WHAT IF BY COLD WATER I DONT MEAN COLD WATER????
WHAT DEFINES THE REALMS OF THE NATURAL WORLD
WHY MUST I BE OPPRESSED BY THE THE LIMITS OF THE SKY!!
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

Here I experimented with rhyming.

Dog rhymes with hog
cat rhymes with hat
(also fat, and bat)
People rhymes with steeple
get rhymes with net
shoe rhymes with you
I like you
i like the word the rhymes with shoe. (you)

Critiques??????