Fic: Down We Go [BBC Sherlock; NC-17]

Dec 29, 2011 14:27

Title: Down We Go (sequel to Under Control)
Fandom: BBC Sherlock
Pairing: John/Sherlock
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4,780
Warnings: Explicit sex involving D/s and hypnosis
Disclaimer: I don't own it.
Summary: Over the years, plenty of people had offered their bodies to Sherlock. He had never accepted, and never planned to. But John was the first person who ( Read more... )

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alltoseek December 30 2011, 06:26:27 UTC
Absolutely wonderful Thank you! :D

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rotaryphones December 30 2011, 18:37:07 UTC
No, thank you! :)

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verucasalt123 December 30 2011, 08:14:15 UTC
This entire concept is fascinating, and you've made it into something endearing and at the same time incredibly hot with this story.

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rotaryphones December 30 2011, 18:37:51 UTC
Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked where it went.

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tie_dyed_vision December 30 2011, 12:28:01 UTC
Okay, I really should be asleep by now, but I couldn't resist when I saw you'd written a sequel!

First of all, while reading Under Control the very appealing idea of bondage-via-hypnosis entered my imagination...so I was over the moon to see it make an appearance here!

Gah, this was just AMAZING. I read the whole thing with a stupid, immense grin on my face. I really like how this relationship has progressed.

And I loved that you wrote this fic from Sherlock's point of view, because I'd been curious about all the thoughts that must be coursing about while he hypnotizes John, and I can't overstate what a brilliant job I thought you did, capturing the contents of his wonderful, terrifying brain.

But then, John Watson was different. He was the first person who had ever offered his mind as well.
♥ ♥ ♥

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rotaryphones December 30 2011, 18:47:46 UTC
Haha, thank you again for another lovely comment! And I apologize for your lack of sleep.

Bondage-via-hypnosis...yep, that definitely happened. Glad you liked that detail.

And I'm so happy that Sherlock's POV worked for you. I admit, he's so daunting I was a little nervous about getting it right. (Or breaking up the narrative too much because Sherlock won't stop analyzing everything.) But thinking about his perspective is basically what gave birth to this sequel.

Thank you!

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kaalee December 30 2011, 16:55:40 UTC
This was really fantastic. I loved the first story in this verse and this one carried the same intensity and sort of dubiousness with it as well. Really well done. ♥

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rotaryphones December 30 2011, 18:48:14 UTC
Thank you so much!

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carlachameleon December 30 2011, 18:39:19 UTC
I really can't tell you how much I enjoyed the sequel. Fabulous!

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rotaryphones December 30 2011, 18:48:31 UTC
Thank you!

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